After receiving feedback from the first draft, there are several key things to be repaired.

1) The use of terms
2) Defining the terms appropriately in order for specification. The more specific the better.
3) Research Questions order DOES represent sequence of research area to be studied.
4) Approach is mixed method and the design is causal-comparative study.
5) When it is causal-comparative, there needs to be a study of difference to be asked in the research     question.